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Tuesday, July 2, 2019

Writing Purpose

Walt: Decide on our purpose for writing

My Purpose for Writing is to Entertain my Audience 


SAD BATMAN

Planning- Batman orders a coffee but its to cold and a donut which is too hot and he becomes sad Batman 
PLOT 
Enters dunkin,
Orders coffee,
Turn looks for a seat,
Sit down,
To hot,
To cold,
Just right.

(Enters Shop)
After a long day from beating up the naughty Joker, Batman felt sad, he hadn’t eaten a donut since his parents died. 

(Orders coffee and donut)
So he went and got one but after he ordered his donuts, he felt very sad because his coffee was cold and his donuts felt like they had just been vomited out by a lord all mighty volcano, so he went back up to the counter to ask for a new coffee or a refund because it was cold and he hoped that his scorching hot donut would cool down while he ordered and waited for his coffee.

Batman waits… and he waits but nobody comes to give him his coffee, sooooo…. He reaches over the counter ands gets a full refund of his coffee and the donut, after batman commits a petty theft he leaves and goes to captain donut.

While at captain donut he’s notices that there only one table that isn't covered in grime, so he went and sat down at the table while he thought about what he’d eat, he decided to just get a normal donut and latte so he went up And ordered his food and went to sit down once he got it.

After he sat down and had a sip of his coffee his tongue felt like it was on fire, and when he grabbed his donut it was really soggy so he didn’t eat it and left the shop with the coffee hoping it would cool down by the time he gets to Dunkin’ donuts.

When he arrives at dunkin donuts he notices it’s in much better condition than the other places it’s clean and has people in the store so batman goes in and orders the same thing as before, coffee and a donut and when he sits down to drink the coffee it’s not too hot and not too cold it’s just right and when he eats the donut it’s not soggy and not extremely hot like it was just made it was the perfect donut! He wastes no time eating the donut, after he’s done eating he heads back to his batmobile and heads back to the bat cave and goes to sleep even though bats are nocturnal. 

2 comments:

  1. Hi there, my name is Grace and I am a student in room 9 at Gisborne intermediate School. I really like your animation video and your writing about sad batman . It made me think of my blog and writing . Have you thought about taking your picture properly so we can see your face.. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is https://gisintgracek.blogspot.com/2019/05/welcome-to-your-blog.html

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  2. hi my name is Axel-Blayde i am at gisborne intermediate school
    i think your art is pretty good i think your pretty talented

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